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Contagious laughter, fingers intertwined,
A kiss on the cheek, on-spot definitions,
The silly things we do, my dear addiction.

Holding you tight, fingers drift on soft skin
And it’s adorable, that little noise you make.
There’s no way that these smiles could be fake.

"Shh! It’s a secret!" But the whole world knows!
How much I crave you and your eyes’ sweet allure.
You, both the symptom and the cure.
©2008-2009 ~LonelyKatt
:iconlonelykatt:

Author's Comments

So this came about as a result of the last line being said by Nicholas about himself on the Caltrain to San Francisco and then we both sat for a long time trying to surround it with other nice-sounding words.

And we were stumped. Today I worked it out and this is the result.

Another cutesy thing I've written (Two in a row! Crikey, it's a shocker!)

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:icontamarack1pines:
This is a rare shimmering beauty of a poem! Call me Impressed! :clap: :D

Sin, tamarack1pines :phae:

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Remember, remember, the Fifth of November...
--V For Vendetta
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:iconhappykitsune:
Wish I was in love enough to appreciate this more. Good job tho. I'm sure if I was happy in love I would adore this :)

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Kitsune Loves Kirin
:iconsleepysleepysleepy:
really really good. i'm not really a fan of poems like these, but this got me, as your title says, "hooked". =P
:iconlonelykatt:
This was not my regular style. I'm kind of testing the boundaries of what my happy moods will help me to write.

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:ahoy: You know you love the pirate smex :ahoy:
:iconlonelykatt:
I don't think one can be in love "enough" I just think that people just kind of find themselves happy with someone and it's kind of unexpected like everything else in life.

My poetry as of late has been all about the imagery.

Thank you, by the way.

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:ahoy: You know you love the pirate smex :ahoy:
:iconlonelykatt:
:bow: Why thank you! I don't know what else to say to such a nice comment.

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:ahoy: You know you love the pirate smex :ahoy:
:iconzollo:
Aww, so nice. :aww: :heart:

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Of course it's intense, it's the sun!
:iconlonelykatt:
:blush: I'm a wee twitterpated girly.

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:ahoy: You know you love the pirate smex :ahoy:
:iconhappykitsune:
Your welcome :)

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Kitsune Loves Kirin

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